I say you should color your stuff more! It reallly adds a lot to your pieces. You captured some good shades in your shadinging and I think it adds a lot of demension.

My only real critique about it, is the sword. Since I'm a weapons junky, weapons that don't line up from one side of the body to the otherside tend to urk me. But other than that, and the shape of the hands, it all good and well done. To fix the hands, I suggest having a little photoshoot, and take some reference pictures of hands so you can draw them in more detail. but obviously the size is going to have to be proportional to the figure you're putting it on, so be wary.

I like the hair though, and I love her character in the show (.Hack//sign). Enjoy the manga. I love the whole serious. Though my favorite is still Full Metal Alchemist (in all areas).

Keep at it though! ^ ^

(btw, that mood guy, is my new mascot lol)

lol i kinda guessed he was as u put him at the end of each of ur comments lol

wow a really long comment hehe aren't i loved

i got fed up of the sword i tryed to correct it but it just wouldn't hehe .. hands well as u know i can't draw them to save my life but gunna keep practising and hope i get better.

how long is the anime of .hack//legend of the twilight??

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really good job on this one, the colors bring it to life ^___^ the sword is awesome(even if it doesnt EXACTLY line up lol) very awesome clothes,shades and coloring ^^ (faves)

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thx for addin it to favs
yer the sword got on my nerves hehe

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lol, the least i could do ^___^ yeah, swords can be very annoying sometimes, and staffes lol. anythin stright basicly ^^"

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yer i agree

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oooh! this is so cool!

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<3 thank you ~iPineapple for the avatar!!!!!<3